The Night of The Convenient Store

by Spinalpalm

for the Novice Round

 
 

Verdict

Tom Fulp

Such a fun story with so many great camera shots. Would love to see it finished!

Stejk Robot

I hope to damn that you fucking finish this. This was super ambitious and if it would have been finished; probably a perfect score from me. Super entertaining, well put together and just damn solid! Great job by the voice actors as well.

Rice Pirate

Damn fucking shame. The beginning was rocking. Art/animation so utterly solid. Perhaps too ambitious, but I can see why. Maintaining the quality for the scope of the project would be hell with a deadline. Top scores in originality and story. Sound scape great. Overall, highly competent from production to entertainment, just not in the deadline department (don't we all). Don't have a lot more to add to that. Hope this gets finished sometime.

Mind Chamber

haha that scoutmaster monologue..... yah need to finish this

Total
56 / 80
Artwork
10 / 16
Animation
8 / 16
Originality
13.5 / 16
Story
13 / 16
Entertainment
11.5 / 16

Score Breakdown

  •  
  • Artwork
  • Animation
  • Originality
  • Story
  • Entertainment
  • Total
  • Average
  • TomFulp
  • 3
  • 3
  • 3.5
  • 4
  • 3.5
  • 17
  • 3.4
  • StejkRobot
  • 2
  • 2
  • 4
  • 4
  • 3
  • 15
  • 3
  • RicePirate
  • 2
  • 2
  • 4
  • 4
  • 3
  • 15
  • 3
  • MindChamber
  • 3
  • 1
  • 2
  • 1
  • 2
  • 9
  • 1.8
  • Totals
  • 10
  • 8
  • 13.5
  • 13
  • 11.5
  • 56
  • 11.2