The Maiden and the Mother

by ZeroELopez

for the Pro Round

 
 

Verdict

Tom Fulp

Your skills have progressed a lot since the beginning of the tournament. There's a lot of passion and ambition in your work and I think we'll see a lot of great work from you as you keep progressing!

Stejk Robot

Really cool entrie, the action and effects are solid, but the story is a bit vague. You've developed a lot during the tournament, looking forward to seeing more from you.

Mind Chamber

fun effects and attack animations. The tragic misunderstanding/ plot twist definitely could've used a bit more impact as I wasn't sure why the daughter was attacking the mother almost immediately after she got the book.. It needs to be a bit more clear.. was fun though!

Red Minus

Really ambitious style and lots of great frame-by-frame animation, Some cool background stuff (like the shots outside and inside the church around the 30 second mark). Nice action too, and some good camera angles. It feels a bit chaotic in some areas though, as though there are different styles competing with each other (like some of the background art with some of the effets/character animations). It's not easy to mix raster and vector art together, but I think that this is something you'll be able to refine over time, your style has a lot of potential. The story itself was tough to figure out on first watch through, but it does feel like there was a lot was was intentionally left vague, so I think it still works.

Total
54.5 / 80
Artwork
10 / 16
Animation
12 / 16
Originality
10.5 / 16
Story
10 / 16
Entertainment
12 / 16

Score Breakdown

  •  
  • Artwork
  • Animation
  • Originality
  • Story
  • Entertainment
  • Total
  • Average
  • TomFulp
  • 3
  • 3
  • 2.5
  • 3
  • 3
  • 14.5
  • 2.9
  • StejkRobot
  • 3
  • 3
  • 2
  • 2
  • 3
  • 13
  • 2.6
  • MindChamber
  • 2
  • 2
  • 3
  • 2
  • 3
  • 12
  • 2.4
  • RedMinus
  • 2
  • 4
  • 3
  • 3
  • 3
  • 15
  • 3
  • Totals
  • 10
  • 12
  • 10.5
  • 10
  • 12
  • 54.5
  • 10.9