Surviving the Fall

by HowardWimshurst

for the Novice Round

 
 

Verdict

Tom Fulp

Unfinished but tells the complete story with tons of great visuals and animation. Very ambitious!

Stejk Robot

As always, your animation, poses, colours, story.. its perfect! Im a sucker for floating islands. And you know what's up, it not finished. So far 2/2 of your entries has made me gasp.

Rice Pirate

Clearly the animator is a professional (or should be). Were I not judging an animatic it would have likely scored a bunch of 5's. From the quality of the work that was presented, I'm confident the animator knows what happened, and really doesn't need my feedback as they are also clearly a much better animator than me lol. From a conceptual stand point, it was very cute, and while the floating island concept isn't particularly original, the use of a Mirror's Edge / Tarzan type race was a fun path to explore.

Mind Chamber

Insane animation, loved all the sketchy line art. Left with a really cool cliff hanger, hope you finish this one

Total
59 / 80
Artwork
11.5 / 16
Animation
12 / 16
Originality
11.5 / 16
Story
11.5 / 16
Entertainment
12.5 / 16

Score Breakdown

  •  
  • Artwork
  • Animation
  • Originality
  • Story
  • Entertainment
  • Total
  • Average
  • TomFulp
  • 3.5
  • 4
  • 3.5
  • 3.5
  • 3.5
  • 18
  • 3.6
  • StejkRobot
  • 2
  • 4
  • 3
  • 3
  • 4
  • 16
  • 3.2
  • RicePirate
  • 2
  • 2
  • 3
  • 2
  • 3
  • 12
  • 2.4
  • MindChamber
  • 4
  • 2
  • 2
  • 3
  • 2
  • 13
  • 2.6
  • Totals
  • 11.5
  • 12
  • 11.5
  • 11.5
  • 12.5
  • 59
  • 11.8