Revolution

by Perrobang

for the Novice Round

 
 

Verdict

Tom Fulp

You really brought your A game with this one! A lot of quality animation throughout and the story kept me transfixed. The music was a perfect fit and elevated the whole thing even higher.

Stejk Robot

HOLY CRAP! Hands down my favorite entry so far, i think you nailed pretty much everything. SO COOL! I felt that the story chould have been added to (mostly because i just want more of this) but other than that GREAT fucking entry, gold star!

Rice Pirate

The classic anime steampunk-ish robo revolt story is fairly common, that said... Perro is clearly a top-notch animator/artist. Direction was great, a little slow and repetitive at first. Aside from derelict buildings, perhaps that intro could have been better served to showcase just how bad things have gotten, a pile of dead bodies, or a frozen hand sticking out of the snow. It was just a long chunk of the animation (wonderfully animated) that could have been used flush out the world of this cartoon more.

Mind Chamber

i luv me sum bots...... great presentation and music

Total
69.5 / 80
Artwork
16 / 16
Animation
16 / 16
Originality
10.5 / 16
Story
12.5 / 16
Entertainment
14.5 / 16

Score Breakdown

  •  
  • Artwork
  • Animation
  • Originality
  • Story
  • Entertainment
  • Total
  • Average
  • TomFulp
  • 4
  • 4
  • 3.5
  • 3.5
  • 3.5
  • 18.5
  • 3.7
  • StejkRobot
  • 4
  • 4
  • 3
  • 4
  • 3
  • 18
  • 3.6
  • RicePirate
  • 4
  • 4
  • 2
  • 2
  • 4
  • 16
  • 3.2
  • MindChamber
  • 4
  • 4
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 17
  • 3.4
  • Totals
  • 16
  • 16
  • 10.5
  • 12.5
  • 14.5
  • 69.5
  • 13.9