Only the Happy Thoughts

by jlorp

for the Novice Round

 
 

Verdict

Tom Fulp

That spider close-up was really cool and the amount of lip-syncing is mind-boggling! You make interesting stories!

Stejk Robot

You have one real solid style there, really like the deadpan humor and monotone voiceacting. Amazing animation, you put a lot into facial expressions and you pull it off really well. I understood the general storyline but had a bit of a hard time seeing how it played into the theme. Overall really great entry!

Rice Pirate

The tone is great, the style is clear if not fairly stark (which works for this). While I understand the direction, a little muddy at times, but I appreciate that things weren't spoon fed the whole time. The score entertainment was bumped down a little as I felt a clearer sound scape would have helped, levels were a bit off and a little music and sfx could really have accented certain moments (though i love the credit music). Was a solid piece.

Mind Chamber

Cool concept, and some really good voice acting, though there seemed to be similar voices that made things a bit flat. its like watching Seinfeld where everybody plays Seinfeld. (with the exception of the one patient)

Total
60.5 / 80
Artwork
11 / 16
Animation
11 / 16
Originality
14 / 16
Story
13.5 / 16
Entertainment
11 / 16

Score Breakdown

  •  
  • Artwork
  • Animation
  • Originality
  • Story
  • Entertainment
  • Total
  • Average
  • TomFulp
  • 3
  • 3
  • 3
  • 3.5
  • 3
  • 15.5
  • 3.1
  • StejkRobot
  • 3
  • 3
  • 3
  • 3
  • 3
  • 15
  • 3
  • RicePirate
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 4
  • 3
  • 16
  • 3.2
  • MindChamber
  • 3
  • 2
  • 4
  • 3
  • 2
  • 14
  • 2.8
  • Totals
  • 11
  • 11
  • 14
  • 13.5
  • 11
  • 60.5
  • 12.1