Live On

by RebellionFA

for the Novice Round

 
 

Verdict

Tom Fulp

Nice action choreography!

Stejk Robot

Real nice fight scene, great timing and poses. The story is lacking a bit sense you dont really get a lot of context to the whole senatio.

Rice Pirate

Fight scenes had a nice fluid feel, though over all the piece felt a little choppy. While the scene was fine, it had very little context, aside from "bad guys coming, kill them." It felt more like snippet pulled from a larger animation that I would have liked to have seen flushed out. What I love is that the animator, while clearly still learning wasn't afraid to take on some crazy FbF, that bodes very well for the animator's future imo.

Mind Chamber

you got the flash down to a science... now work on substance..and maybe a bit of anatomy...still i dug it

Total
50 / 80
Artwork
8.5 / 16
Animation
13 / 16
Originality
7.5 / 16
Story
9 / 16
Entertainment
12 / 16

Score Breakdown

  •  
  • Artwork
  • Animation
  • Originality
  • Story
  • Entertainment
  • Total
  • Average
  • TomFulp
  • 2.5
  • 3
  • 2.5
  • 3
  • 3
  • 14
  • 2.8
  • StejkRobot
  • 2
  • 3
  • 2
  • 2
  • 3
  • 12
  • 2.4
  • RicePirate
  • 2
  • 3
  • 2
  • 2
  • 2
  • 11
  • 2.2
  • MindChamber
  • 2
  • 4
  • 1
  • 2
  • 4
  • 13
  • 2.6
  • Totals
  • 8.5
  • 13
  • 7.5
  • 9
  • 12
  • 50
  • 10