How I Survived the Sea

by Magnivez

for the Novice Round

 
 

Verdict

Tom Fulp

Really digging your style, will always be watching!

Stejk Robot

Man the pirate chip and the seamonster were icredible. Really dig the monster design and the ship animation was just beautiful. Love the pink and blue, you mnaged to set a really nice mood. I did feel like it was cut short, i wanted to see what happend after he jumped into the water sense it didnt seem that safe around those parts. Real nice entry, good job man!

Rice Pirate

That ship at the intro, holy shit. Well done. Over all, fairly sketchy, some of it felt unfinished, however it's clear the animator knows how to animate. Escaping a monster isn't the most original, but the premise was still solid. Entertainment got bumped down due to lack of sound effects which I think is really essential if you're going to go strictly with action. SFX are pretty much the dialogue of a fight/action scene (especially that splash at the end). Like a few of the entries I've judged, this animator clearly knows what's up, just didn't have the polish to knock it out of the park. Excited to see more, for sure.

Mind Chamber

loved the sketchy look, and dug the shots with the monster, overall a fun sequence.

Total
54 / 80
Artwork
11.5 / 16
Animation
11.5 / 16
Originality
10 / 16
Story
10 / 16
Entertainment
11 / 16

Score Breakdown

  •  
  • Artwork
  • Animation
  • Originality
  • Story
  • Entertainment
  • Total
  • Average
  • TomFulp
  • 3.5
  • 3.5
  • 3
  • 3
  • 3
  • 16
  • 3.2
  • StejkRobot
  • 3
  • 3
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 12
  • 2.4
  • RicePirate
  • 2
  • 3
  • 2
  • 2
  • 3
  • 12
  • 2.4
  • MindChamber
  • 3
  • 2
  • 4
  • 3
  • 2
  • 14
  • 2.8
  • Totals
  • 11.5
  • 11.5
  • 10
  • 10
  • 11
  • 54
  • 10.8