How I Survived the drop

by DocJoshimitsu

for the Novice Round

 
 

Verdict

Tom Fulp

Your animation has progressed so much this year, I'm really excited to see how far you go! The shot of the streamers on the bike handle is really really nicely done.

Stejk Robot

Man.. You just wont stop making me crap my pants. AMAZING animation. INCREDIBLE poses. UNREAL colors. You got all the things. The points drop because its not finished, you got this in a box if you can just finish an entry! I wish you showed more of the story, you have this great set up were there is a struggle and she overcomes it. But i have no idea what that struggle is. Oh and such a great score! Keep at it man!

Rice Pirate

Such a bummer. Clearly the animator knows what they're doing, and clearly time was against them. I have no idea if it was an ambition-against-the-clock issue, but clearly the finished piece in the animators mind would have been awesome. To be clear, despite my scores, loved the art, animation, and direction, just have to score it based on what was presented. Please keep rocking it, can't begin the imagine the awesome that will come from this animator (DocJosh).

Mind Chamber

absolutely loved the colors in this.. big fan of the hot and colds.. loved the literal analogy of fighting your demons. gotta finish this

Total
59 / 80
Artwork
10.5 / 16
Animation
11.5 / 16
Originality
11 / 16
Story
12 / 16
Entertainment
14 / 16

Score Breakdown

  •  
  • Artwork
  • Animation
  • Originality
  • Story
  • Entertainment
  • Total
  • Average
  • TomFulp
  • 3.5
  • 3.5
  • 3
  • 3
  • 3
  • 16
  • 3.2
  • StejkRobot
  • 2
  • 4
  • 3
  • 2
  • 4
  • 15
  • 3
  • RicePirate
  • 1
  • 2
  • 2
  • 3
  • 3
  • 11
  • 2.2
  • MindChamber
  • 4
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 4
  • 17
  • 3.4
  • Totals
  • 10.5
  • 11.5
  • 11
  • 12
  • 14
  • 59
  • 11.8