Cookoff

by AmazingSpin

for the Pro Round

 
 

Verdict

Tom Fulp

I didn't grasp the initial motivations / misunderstanding on the first time through but got it all on the second. Got really fun when the action kicked in, would love to see it finished!

Stejk Robot

You are great at telling a story visually, i always fall in love with all of your characters. I really dig the darknes of the conflict contrasted with the sweet end.

Mind Chamber

Fun story idea, dug the use of images for dialogue.. the terminator reference made me lol...finish it!

Red Minus

I like how the characters and general tone stays cute despite some of the dark things that are actually happening. I also think the word-bubble visuals work really well for the style, while also being a great way to tell the story without dialogue (or even without words, for that matter). I thought it felt like a bit of a bumpy start though, I found it a bit difficult to grasp what was going on right away, but that sort of felt like it settled somewhat as it went on. I'm sure that would've been less of an issue overall had everything been finished... you've had some of my favorite entries this year, I hope you can eventually find the time to finish this one!

Total
58.5 / 80
Artwork
11.5 / 16
Animation
10 / 16
Originality
13 / 16
Story
12 / 16
Entertainment
12 / 16

Score Breakdown

  •  
  • Artwork
  • Animation
  • Originality
  • Story
  • Entertainment
  • Total
  • Average
  • TomFulp
  • 3
  • 3
  • 3
  • 3
  • 3
  • 15
  • 3
  • StejkRobot
  • 2.5
  • 3
  • 3
  • 4
  • 4
  • 16.5
  • 3.3
  • MindChamber
  • 4
  • 2
  • 3
  • 2
  • 2
  • 13
  • 2.6
  • RedMinus
  • 2
  • 2
  • 4
  • 3
  • 3
  • 14
  • 2.8
  • Totals
  • 11.5
  • 10
  • 13
  • 12
  • 12
  • 58.5
  • 11.7